It takes great courage to express such profound thoughts and emotions through poetry, and you've done so with remarkable finesse.

The imagery you've created, from the "golden fodder" of wheatfields to the haunting presence of the browned dog, is vivid and evocative and very strong.

Your unique style and poetic voice shine brightly in this piece. I love it! Finally a voice that is its own!

Thank you for this amazing poem!