"The small-town setting of Cassville, Wisconsin, comes to life in your writing. You capture the nuances of the community and the familiar dynamics between the residents. I enjoyed reading your article! You have a great way of describing the scene and creating a vivid picture in the reader's mind. I could almost feel the cold air and see the characters in Noonie's Tap. Well done!"
The way you incorporated Newton's Law of Inertia into Mitch's situation was clever and added a touch of scientific knowledge to the story. It shows attention to detail and adds depth to the narrative.
Thank you for writing this. I really enjoyed it.