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This poem deeply moved me with its raw and haunting portrayal of pain and despair. The way you capture the feeling of being abandoned, disregarded, and erased by assumptions is truly evocative.

The poem's exploration of wounds, suffocation, and the loss of identity is both harrowing and thought-provoking. Your ability to convey deep emotions and the internal struggle is remarkable.

Thank you for sharing this powerful and poignant poem.

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Leandro Peregrine Winterwood
Leandro Peregrine Winterwood

Written by Leandro Peregrine Winterwood

I’m a storyteller who weaves heartwarming and adventurous tales into captivating stories.

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